The first part of the crit went quite well, starting with a quick talk about what we intended to do concerning the new brief and put forward any major issues we thought needed addressing in the follow up discussion.
My feedback for the initial discussion was well recieved, that my intentions, values, and ambitions concerning the format/deliverables were clear and easy to understand. The main negative was that there was no need for an inclusion of the 'Britishisms' element within it, since it only confused my brand value and detracted away from what should be a much easier brief.
For the first time this year, my blog is now up to date (with this brief) and is reflected by the positive feedback I got back. Overall my documentation was progressive, easy to follow, my level of analysis was of a good standard, with minimal waffling (for once) and that my organisation of materials was 'laid out in a rational way, makes sense' with the only main negative was to make my blog much cleaer in terms of presentation and the posts to be a different colour. Even an extra comment on good time management....
To review, the main things I need to do now are:
- Research into in-game jokes; find gamers and collect data
- Lose the British linguistics; it only complicates things
- Re-consider propositions
- Structure what I have time to do
- Pick 3 main game characters to have for next week.
- Final brand name and logo finalised for next week.
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