Final Crit

Main points from Mille and Kate:

• Clear design direction; good evidence of design process and have tested alot of different ideas. 

• Annotation is evident and demonstrates my decision making considering the design work.

• Can see this existing in the 'real world' market, high quality and suitable for the audience.

• everything clearly presented and design direction clear throughout.

Overall, the most successful final crit of the course, lots of positive and constructive feedback.

Main points from Lauren, Will and Ollie were:

• The blog is clear, easy to follow, and demonstrates my creative flow/thought process throughout the project. This applies to both context and practice, overall everything is really clear and makes sense.

• Make sure everything is tagged and double check the level and quality of the annotation

• Boards: no need for an impact board, but rather an overview of my brief, with some relevant development work. Products in context.

• Need to retake the product shots, or just photoshop them to look more crisp and show off the products themselves. Try to keep the boards in some sort of uniformity (see clarity of boards)

• Website looks great on screen, not so good in print.

Action Plan:

1. Viral campaign photos
2. Product shots
3. Website
4. Boards finished 
5. Update blog